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(ODD) Odyssey of the Ostracized

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Rainbowdash is property of Hasbro
Character Dashie belongs to :iconrainb0wdashie:\'s story
Our Day in Disdain (ODD).
The first chapter is linked here below!
Our Day in Disdain | Chapter 1| A Groan of Tedium
Please give it a read if you've got the time! :D
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I skimmed it to see the character's reason for sharing an appearance and name with Rainbow Dash (it's the same root-word and a nickname of RD's), and while the writing itself has room for improvement, I'm mainly here to say this character shouldn't be advertised as an entirely original character. The piece here is drawn well, but it doesn't really allow for any interpretation that would suggest this character has no relation to Rainbow Dash- and to be clear, when I say "relation", I mean in all senses of the word, as in through inspiration, or blood relation, or alternate identity, or even something crazy like a clone or Rainbow Dash from an alternate universe. I understand you don't want to spoil anything, but passing the character off as entirely original, and through this piece alone, gives the impression that this character is an attempt to pass off a pony identical to Rainbow Dash (save for injuries) as a slightly tweaked, but still entirely original character. Just acknowledge that, that's all. I'm not trying to start an argument, I just felt like this had to be said.